21071049 – Techtonics : Water Wars – Rise of Titans

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   2. Presentation Review :
   2.1 Page 1: Update Team ID as per website; remove bold for values; update the proposal title in place of TITLE PAGE
   2.2 Page 2: Flowchart is merely visible, give a link to HD image in drive along with it; bold/ highlight the words like ‘Interactive Game’, ‘mobile app’ etc., and similar keywords in all the sections in the presentation; Re write a one liner about the proposed solution; divide the proposal addressing section in to separate and organize modules and highlight them; in the innovation and uniqueness section a mentioin about existing solutions must be given and highlight your enhancements to them and then list other points;
   2.3 Page 3: Technology stack must be mapped to the modules of solution; too many mentions were observed which could lead to dilution in the understanding of your tools; use icons of popular tech that you have mentioned
   2.4 Page 4: Content is good, try different way of presenting it i.e., layout
   2.5 Page 5: use some stats to demonstrate impact or benefits;
   2.6 Page 6: map references to the content you have used in your presentation.

   3. Idea Review :
   3.1 understood one point ‘ game to get awareness on water conservation’, but not at all clear of how the game would be implemented fr different set of users; levels of games, clear objectives and outcomes for each kind ( kid,youth and adults) of user is not given any mention which fails me to understand your target users.
   3.2 design levels/game paths for each and every kind of user.

   4. Video Review:
   Video presentation went in isolation with the presentation slides; Presenters felt like readers and their body language also convened a disinterest of proposal; i feel that is the place you need to improve a lot as marketing/ explanation/ presentation is the first impression.

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